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Tue, 01/01/2008 - 6:26pm

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evl poems

ok this is my chance to show i have something so just let me know what you think! i was told by a friend of mine to do so so this is for you!

A brand new year brand new time

A brand new year brand new time
Another chance for redemption and renew
Chance to start a life you never knew
A chance to do the unexpected
A chance to be non reluctant
A brand new year brand new time
A time to know what to change
A real chance to be re arranged
A new history to begin
A day to forget any sin
A year to remember or a time to forget
A time to get all goals met
A brand new year brand new time

to the new year everyone

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Thu, 01/03/2008 - 6:49pm

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BRAVO!

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Thu, 01/03/2008 - 7:06pm

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thanks im working on another!!!!!

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Fri, 01/04/2008 - 11:18am

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Can't wait to see it!

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Fri, 01/04/2008 - 11:20pm

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ok this is a ok one

There Is No Hero

A song once sung
A story once told
No hero lives today
We will help you they proclaim
Not knowing what tommow brings
There is no hero
When children are alone to fend for themselfs
And parents are the children
No there isnt a hero here
When a child says i am afraid
Others dont know what to do
No one helps, no one cares and no one is a hero
When a child is turned away
and no one gives a damn
Its really time to realise
There is no hero here.

ok i wrote this a while back when i was like 11-12 so cut me some slack on this one

Seeing Is Beliving

Seeing is beliving
Not a moment too soon
I see the sky as i walk
The rain dropin down opon my face
Seeing is beliving
With snow across the sky
With a snowflake on my shoulder
Wow amasing what find
Seeing is beliving
Seaves opon the ground
Creatures in a hole
Birds go to see the warmth
Seeing is beliving
As the small buds pop up
The snow begins to dry
Sleeping under a tree I was truely met to see
Seeing is beliving
As i really can provide
Seasons wizzing by
As i just stand to watch
Seeing is beliving

thats all folks haha

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Sat, 01/05/2008 - 12:20am

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Super awesome!!

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Sun, 01/06/2008 - 2:32am

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My Pain
My pain is real
and always feared
im never understood
im never right or good
im seen as a door aways shut
i like it its my security
my way to ignore the missing stability
i feel pain it makes me the person i am today
im never sure on where to go
what to do
or what to say
but i do know
i feel pain
unknown to the outside world
im a door always shut never open
afraid to show my emotion
my pain is real
but always hidden

i threw that one together

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Mon, 01/07/2008 - 10:23am

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Mm that one's bitter

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Mon, 01/07/2008 - 4:58pm

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thanks i know im good at that style!!!!

Please Shut Up and Listen
Please shut up and listen
I understand your job
Just sit there trying to make me better
Listen to me for once
Im not dumb
I have my problems
Please shut up and listen
I need help
I need a helping hand
Just sit and listen dont talk
Im afraid of everything
No confedence in anything
Please shut up and listen
I need a person to hear what i say
And not contradict what i mean
Hear me out
I need you to quiet down
Listen to my issues
Understand me more
Please shut up and listen!!!!!

To My Hero
To my hero cheers to you
You saved me more than once
When i was silent
You could hear
Listening to my hurtful thoughts
Cheers to you my Hero
Im blessed with all your gifts
A gift of joy
A gift of love
Most of all your gift of heart
To my hero cheers to you
My rescuer from my hurtful ways
Im truely honored to know your name
Your hands touched me and i was safe
Cheers to you my gifted hero
Your voice spoke to me in a way unknow to you
For once let me help you and give a gift
To you my hero
A gift of hope from me to you
Thank you my hero.

enjoy!

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 1:03am

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The title of the first one made me LOL at the title. it's good tho

Green Day would be proud of your second one

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 11:47am

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thanks its just a fun poem!

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 1:56pm

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You welcome!

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 4:37pm

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ok i have a new one

Behind A Smile

Behind that smile
is a sad little girl
a heart broken brought down child
Behind that smile
is a lie
a fake happy expression
when inside your crying
Behind that smile
i sence a long road of heart break
a desencitized state of mind
Behind that smile
a heart that will never be happy
a pretend game that never ends
Behind that half ass smile
lies a missing childhood
a little less pride
a little less confedence
a little less love
Behind that smile
is a sad broken heart

tada

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 5:52pm

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It's abra cadabra!!!!

Love this one too.

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 6:52pm

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girl im not that good not all of these masterpieces are good haha jk but ya thanks anyway

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 7:22pm

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Not all your masterpieces are good?

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 7:59pm

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tehe very funny

ok a short one maybe im winging it

Spread your wings and fly

Spread your wings and fly
to heven oh devine
the soft air against my wings
the sound of silence makes me sing
Spread your wings and fly
to unknown places just to find
theres a seat in heven just for me
lets see what i can see
Spread your wings and fly
what can you find

best i could do!!!

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 8:42pm

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The best u can do? I want the greatest you can do!!! I like this one btw.

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 9:13pm

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thanks!!!!

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Tue, 01/08/2008 - 11:00pm

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You welcome!!

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Wed, 01/09/2008 - 10:41am

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I think you, and NOES could put your poetry on Mibba.
It's a poetry/fan fiction/journal site, and you both could get some really good pointers for improving your work. It's a really great site, i think you both could benefit!

-by improve i don't mean it by your shit. just that everyone can improve at everything! so no offense to be taken.

Wed, 01/09/2008 - 11:52am

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thanks stef i wrote the site down cauz im not home and i feel the same way i like it when ppl give me pointers it helps me become a better at well what ever im doing!!!!!

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Thu, 01/10/2008 - 9:46am

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I've heard about that site on GSB. WOW there's gsb again!

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Thu, 01/10/2008 - 4:24pm

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i never went on im happy here! im working on another not done yet!

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Thu, 01/10/2008 - 8:23pm

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ok here is one i dug up

Star
Small and bright
My little light
What will you show me tonight
What i seek is something small
A drift across the sky
For you to hold me when i cry
Pick me up and as i glide
Please catch my falls each time
Small and bright
My little light
I love the dream you grant tonight
Oh my little light

tada

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Tue, 01/15/2008 - 7:42pm

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ok i have got a new one

soul lost in the sea
This soul is lost in the sea
misunderstud and shuned from sanity
This soul is broken
and always wearie
This poor soul is lost
not sure where to go or what to do
This sad soul is never happy
afraid to be the one it wishes to be
This soul is in pain
no one sees the pain it shows
This soul is lost in the sea
like a ship underwater never to be found
The soul in the sea

im just a misfit

im just a misfit
nowhere really to go
im a outsider with no direction
im just a misfit
the one who is unknown
im the clueless one in the hall
im just a misfit
the one walking amelessly around
im the weird one in the world
im just a misfit
this is how i like it
this is my island
im just a misfit

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Tue, 01/15/2008 - 7:54pm

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evasgreenday100":2yxv70cd wrote:

i never went on im happy here! im working on another not done yet!

awww ur a suck up!! hahaha JK

evasgreenday100":2yxv70cd wrote:

ok i have got a new one

soul lost in the sea
This soul is lost in the sea
misunderstud and shuned from sanity
This soul is broken
and always wearie
This poor soul is lost
not sure where to go or what to do
This sad soul is never happy
afraid to be the one it wishes to be
This soul is in pain
no one sees the pain it shows
This soul is lost in the sea
like a ship underwater never to be found
The soul in the sea

im just a misfit

im just a misfit
nowhere really to go
im a outsider with no direction
im just a misfit
the one who is unknown
im the clueless one in the hall
im just a misfit
the one walking amelessly around
im the weird one in the world
im just a misfit
this is how i like it
this is my island
im just a misfit

Love these!

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Tue, 01/15/2008 - 8:02pm

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how do you think im passing school and thanks

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Tue, 01/15/2008 - 8:19pm

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& what do you mean to say by that?

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Tue, 01/15/2008 - 9:25pm

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simple im am the best suck up at school but who is putting the tack on teachers chair!

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 12:28am

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HAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH..............No just kidding.

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 12:39am

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yep

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 1:10am

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I kill me!

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 11:51am

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"i kill you"
haha

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 11:58am

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i got another one

i used to

i used to be a hero
i used to be smart
i used to be good
i used to be able
i used to be the girl you always respect
i used to be the strong one
i used to be the girl you loved

i used to see this life in a new way
i used to see the world
i used to see life
i used to see my fults
i used to see the living
i used to see the life of others

i used to
i used to
i used to
i used to be someone

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 12:49pm

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COOL YAY!

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 10:04pm

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thx

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 10:52pm

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You welcome

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Thu, 01/17/2008 - 9:51am

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im working on one so it will be on soon!

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Thu, 01/17/2008 - 10:44am

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YAY

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Wed, 01/23/2008 - 12:37am

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when i look in the mirror i dont see me
i see a face thats deciveing
i dont know who i became
this beast filled with shame
i never will show my skin
for the fear of what i did
the thought of being judged
the thought of the misunderstood
the fear of being told the worst

when i look in the mirror i dont see me
a longing to be free
of this demon in my soul
and yet i let it take control
this i let control my future
with this knife that makes me the buture
i make my feelings shown
though i want to hid my flaw
this is my problem that i sadly show

when i look in the mirror i dont see me
i only see these scars across my limbs
i only can see the razor on the sink
or the bloody towl around my fingers
i dont see me i see this addiction
when i look in the mirror i dont see me
how bout you

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Wed, 01/23/2008 - 10:28pm

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Yay

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Wed, 01/23/2008 - 10:53pm

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i never realised how realisticly i write or how true to my life i write thats sad huh hahajk

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Thu, 01/24/2008 - 12:06am

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I'm the same.

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Thu, 01/24/2008 - 12:21am

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yay we are the realists!

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Mon, 01/28/2008 - 11:05pm

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*dedicated to my grandma*
i hardly knew you and time is out
i never could see the soul you hold
i feel so bad for never knowing who you were
or who you are
i never made the effort to be the one you love the most
or the one who is you hero in a sence

i hardly knew you and time is out
the time i had has run so short
ill never get to see the soul in your eye
from what im told you lived for life
not to be done with it
im sorry i hardly knew you and now my time is out

im not sure if i can trust you
for i have been scared many times before
but for a reason i cant explain
there is no reason why i cant
im a little weary about you
but i cant argue with your kindness
as much as i want to argue
for some reason i just cant
im not sure if i can trust you
but i feel no threat to your ways
you sound so kind
but is that a lie
formed inside your head?
i dont know if i should forget you
but in many ways i cant
i wish i could forget you
but my heart refused to give
i dont know if i can trust you
though you treat me with respect
but for all i know that could be your plot
i belive that im in trouble
i cant decide what i really ment
or is it the fact i have two opinions
running in my head
i dont know if i can trust you
but then again i can
you make it hard to desifer
if i can or cant
i still dont know if i can trust you
but i will garentee ill try
this time i will trust you
but nothing for the next time

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Tue, 01/29/2008 - 2:06pm

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Sounds like my late grandma and I

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Tue, 01/29/2008 - 4:10pm

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yep

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Wed, 01/30/2008 - 1:28pm

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I like it tho

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Thu, 01/31/2008 - 7:17pm

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thank you thank you thank you very much!

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Fri, 02/01/2008 - 9:26am

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You welcome!!

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