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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 3:49pm

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My poems

It's my turn everyone!! This is old! It has no title either.

All I feel is shame
that knife is calling
my name.
Maybe all the hurt
will be gone, and I
wont see the dawn.
The tears fall faster than
rain, how is it possible to
feel so insane?
I can't sleep at night,
trying to win this internal
fight.
That razor is my friend,
it always understands.
There's no one to talk to,
no one to hold. My mind is
beginning to fold. It's there,
it's calling out to me, I will set
you free.

NO title for this either!

One more ngiht of fighting, these
emotions I keep hiding. The tissues aren't
enough, I can't seem to stay tough.
That dream I always had seems impossible to
reach, this gap we cannot breach.
We do all we can for this not to end,
why were things better when we were
friends?
I am losing my mind, but 'm losing you too.
It scares me to think this will all be over soon.
I make a wish upon a full moon, that somehow
you love me too.

Thanks!

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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 4:15pm

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loveit!!!! i am not good with poetry!

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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 4:18pm

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Thanks! I'm sure you'd be great if you tried.

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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 5:18pm

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im just spit balling this one so cut me some slack

the thing you see and the face i show are two diffrent people
i show a happy and joyest face but hide the one with shame
with no questions asked just look at me what do you see?
do you see the fake smile i show or the or the hate i never show
do you see the positive reaction or the pain i show on my sleeve
look at me are theis scars from a animal or my lies and pain begin to show
keep looking am i a child or an adult trying to get her childhood back
when i talk do hear the thing i have went though or that im just ok
if i told you my story would you clame i lied or try to understand
when i tell you i want to just cry would you turn me down for a sholder to do so
if i said i hurt would you not care to know why
i hid and lied to everyone the face i show is the opisit of my real face
you see smiles i see tears and mudilated skin no happy here if you look
look at me what do you see, me lieing or the real story behind that smile.

ok i tryied what do you think ya its a bad day for me

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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 5:20pm

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That was really good. You should make a thread with all your poems and writing in it.

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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 5:25pm

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i was fooling around with my missing mental stability idk i would be afraid of the critisum alot of my writting is my total break downs and my hard times and well depression!

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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 6:26pm

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DO IT

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Mon, 12/31/2007 - 6:32pm

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id be scared! haha i am supriseingly very shy haha

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Tue, 01/01/2008 - 2:36am

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Dwoo it Em dwoo it!

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Tue, 01/01/2008 - 4:20pm

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wrong name haha i lost track of names em eva emily shit im really confused and i did that on my own haha ok ill throw shit together and ill start the tread soon promis!!!

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Wed, 01/02/2008 - 5:07am

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im not into poems too much, urs are all nice,though.
i used to write story .....
so i love Salinger's works too much

A traffic jam, when you're already late
A "No smoking" sign, on your cigarette break
It's like ten thousand spoons, when all you need is a knife
It's meeting the man of my dreams, and then meeting his beautiful wife
And isn't it ironic?
Don't you think?

Wed, 01/02/2008 - 7:20am

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thanks and its great that you write storys i wish i had writting in rehab i was so brain dead at the time i didnt even think of doing it!! if i wrote maybe i wouldnt be in the same situation again!

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Wed, 01/02/2008 - 12:14pm

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u were in rehab?

Wed, 01/02/2008 - 2:43pm

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you haven't come to figure that out Parinaz?

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Wed, 01/02/2008 - 6:04pm

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oh i dont mind the way that i see it is if i did shit then others can learn from my mistakes. i was in sever therapy or as refered to a rehab for cutting and i will more or less likely to do that again i was a sever cutter where i was at the point i would do anything for that well "high" like use dull knifes/broken light bulbs/pencils anything it got sad and i am getting to that point again and this time around im smarter about it and i did nothing when i was there and now i want to and i want help!!! is not so much of a big deal but draining. so ya i was and im not afraid to admit it eather and im proud of that i am getting help and i think thats something to be impressed with most are dead before they ever get to that point!!! hope that explains alot!

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Thu, 01/03/2008 - 6:16am

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of course its not bad at all

Thu, 01/03/2008 - 11:18am

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good now where wer we!?

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Fri, 01/04/2008 - 11:18am

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On topic

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Fri, 01/04/2008 - 11:08pm

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ok i have to say have you looked at the poems by Langston Hues (i may be wrong on the spelling) thoughs are beautiful!

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Sat, 01/05/2008 - 12:17am

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No I haven't looked at his poems tbh. And no spamming my thread.

I found more:

It's hard for me to find
the light that glows through
your eyes, this demon
it haunts us, darkens
the room. That feeling
that paralysis, wont let
me move. This anger
this rage is all I seem to
engage in. My soul is
trapped, like a bird in a
cage. All my efforts, my
love is gone to waste.
Possessing my soul,
trapped it all. Letting
go ofyou as I fall. No matter
what happens I know you'll be
there. So go ahead and love
me if you dare.

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Sun, 01/06/2008 - 2:24am

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what did i say i dont think i was slaming and that was awsome i love it

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Mon, 01/07/2008 - 10:22am

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evasgreenday100":3azat3d0 wrote:

what did i say i dont think i was spaming and that was awsome i love it

SHHH!!! haha thanks

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Mon, 01/07/2008 - 4:40pm

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you can go on to poetry.com or something and get new poets around!

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Tue, 01/15/2008 - 8:15pm

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What is the reason we're all alive?
The reason we're all torn inside?
Strolling through this world blind
as a bat, wishing our wallets were fat.
Do you dare tell me there's a higher
power? While we're drowning in this
shower of horror, who is this God you
speak of? The one who watches from
above, Everytime you cry, fall as you
try to fly, suffocate when you try to
breathe. Rejoicing while we die under
neath his feet, my faith is growing weak.
The flame on the candle has disappeared,
what I've always feared has appeared before my eyes,
the place that harbors the lies, encourages humanity's cries.
There is no place for hell to exists, there's only hell on Earth.
We are cursed since birth, we've grown so numb and can't feel
the burns. So there must be no God if He just watches me
crumble and fall, how naive must I be to not believe he was there
all along? How long will I keep my ignorance inside and live in this
shell, I live in my own personal hell. First you must understand
that it's just the nature of men. Nothing in this world must be
heaven sent.

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Tue, 01/15/2008 - 9:23pm

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i love it!!!!!!!!!

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 12:26am

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Pulled that right out of my ass dude!! haha

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 12:37am

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i do the same thing

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 1:11am

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[spoiler:2sufv920][/spoiler:2sufv920]

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Wed, 01/16/2008 - 11:52am

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Thu, 03/27/2008 - 3:12am

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It's 2:30 am, leave me alone :P

Every corner I turned
there was always something
to make my soul burn.
These four walls are closing in,
happiness feels like a sin.
Afraid of the weird,
I was becoming what I feared.
Although still blinded, I reached
out my hand and felt your flawless
presence.
The brightness hurt my eyes,
as I discovered the truth to all
these lies.
My former persona suddenly dies,
a new being now flies.
I fall to my knees and wonder
where I would be if it weren't for
your arms around me.
A new day has come,
you have outdone what
had made me dumb.
Giving me something to
finally live for,
it is you who have opened the door.
No longer broken and bruised,
you've made it alright to choose.
Separating fiction from fact,
you gave me my individuality back.

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Thu, 03/27/2008 - 3:06pm

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Nice Liz.

I loved it.

Thu, 03/27/2008 - 3:11pm

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Thanks dear

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Thu, 03/27/2008 - 10:42pm

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i love it!

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Fri, 03/28/2008 - 12:40am

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Thanks ya'll!!

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Sun, 06/08/2008 - 9:50pm

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NimrodOnElmStreet":ku6q2l7w wrote:

Thanks ya'll!!

I You

Mon, 06/09/2008 - 5:56pm

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i you too Lol

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Sun, 02/01/2009 - 7:51am

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Those are good NOES.

Mon, 02/02/2009 - 6:44pm

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Thanks

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Sun, 03/08/2009 - 9:45pm

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Here comes the moon to cover up the sun
Here comes the night to blanket the crystal sky.
No one ever told me how fast the time goes by.

Here I am in another virtual setting.
Here I am doing what is impossible.
The lights flash every color, I want to
scream, but my words come out like a stutter.

I am stuck in my mind with four padded walls.
One step and I could fall, fall to the depths of hell.
Down to the depths of fear, where there are no
ringing bells.

Here I am in another virtual setting.
Here I am doing what is impossible.
The lights flash every color, I want to
scream, but my words come out like a stutter.

The fog dissipates, but the darkness stays.
In my bed I am lying wide awake.
At last I have made my way through it seems.
Life twists and turns, I awake to find it wasn't
a dream.

I just wrote that like right now lol

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Mon, 04/06/2009 - 5:41pm

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OK ya'll here's another one!

what's wrong with me tonight?
i don't want to fight.
Nothing more regretful
than this, it's just how
it is.

This carousel is
slowing down.
Turning my smile
into a frown.
Life is holding me
down, I am hell bound.

Walls are caving in
I am shit full of sin.
A dark sun begins
to set in the sky.
I wonder what it's like
to die.

This carousel is
slowing down.
Turning my smile
into a frown.
Life is holding me
down, I am hell bound.

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"One thing that both me and Billie can relate to is what happens if you are brought up in a house full of women. It opens your eyes r

Sun, 06/07/2009 - 11:49pm

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"heaven on fire"

everything has rotten away, the world is on fire.
all that's left is you and I, and our depleted desire
there's no hope no faith, nothing left but hate
It's hell on earth, all demons are a birth. We burnt God alive, humanity will die.
it's heaven on fire
The apocalypse is here, the end is near.
Striking fear in us, our dreams reduced to dust
we are alone, we'll reap the threads we've sewn.
It's heaven on fire, there's no desire. No reason to wake up, we've lit up the gas from beneath our toes.
How do u like living in this dump?

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Sat, 02/27/2010 - 12:26am

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Wow you are so good
I only write sometimes and mine aren't anywhere as good as yours...

"A lot of people, when they talk to me, I can't wait for them to shut up. Like, shut up. you're a moron. I have nothing to say, you know?"

Sat, 02/27/2010 - 1:55am

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mine are more rants than poetry, but thank you. You should start your own thread.

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Sat, 02/27/2010 - 1:58am

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I'm afraid that one wouldn't be very active xD
And I don't know...they're just not that good; I rather read yours^^

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Sat, 02/27/2010 - 10:01am

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um...thanks...weird

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